Pride and Prejudice:
Goals: improve on creating concise, strong sentences
I completely agree with Dr. Forman! When I was writing my essay, I was struggling to effectively construct my essay. I feel like my body paragraphs are too long and I need to work on paragraph structure! I spent a lot of time choosing a title for my essay and i succeeded! I think my title paid off because at the end of the novel I concluded with the main idea of my essay. Also, I need to work on that less is ore! I should not use as many complex words because it only complicates the essay...!
In my Hamlet essay, my theists statement was too specific and it didn't fully emerge till the conclusion. My introductory paragraph contains a lot of details rather than an overview of my main ideas. Again, I need to be cautious of my word choice. Overall, I should have explored the significance in my intro and my thesis statement.
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